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Sassy

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Re: Poems and odes....
« Reply #25 on: January 28, 2016, 04:13:24 PM »

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You sound like you could do with planning a holiday somewhere nice 💐

That usually cheers me up ( unless I'm skint and a bit short of dosh)

Sounds like you need to treat yourself to something :)

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I keep saying " I need a holiday" even a cottage by the sea where you can only listen to music, read, watch tv/movies and go to a local pub for a nightcap. Would be lovely and the less likely it is to happen the more you are reminded how much we need that break to get our life back on track... :)
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Samuel

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Re: Poems and odes....
« Reply #26 on: January 28, 2016, 06:35:03 PM »
Nice one Sass. It's good to get the creative mind flowing every once in a while. I cobbled this together for a bit fun recently. It's about my children... You'll have to excuse the nicknames (why do parents always do that?)

The Doll

Bibblebum and Bostiavan were sat upon their stools
Rowing over sharing toys and making noise like mules

Mum and dad looked on and sighed, they’d really had enough
Surrounded by the heaps of toys - ignored, unwanted stuff

“Bostiavan”, said Bibblebum, “I really think you ought
To give me dolly straight away. You stole, and have been caught”

“No Way” came Bostiavan’s reply, “You know it is my turn
To carry dolly round the house. When will you ever learn?”

“Excuse me sir, but dolly’s mine!” she roared in shrill retort
“I can’t long stand an attitude or behaviour of this sort!”

“Here you go…” in seeming truth the Bostiavan did offer
Only to retract the doll, his arms wrapped tight around her

“MUMMY!” came the pleading cry of a sister’s firm resolve
To see her dolly’s safe return from a brothers treacherous hold

“You’ve many other toys you know!” mum didn’t understand
That when your sibling has a thing you must claim it for your hand

“I’ll have it then” the game was up, Dad had got involved
“And keep it while you learn to share, just like you have been told”


It mattered not for Bostiavan and Bibblebum both saw
Another way to stay their course and carry on their war

Two beanbags, blue and brownish cream, become the battleground
To bump and bash and bump again… a new game had been found!

And in their glee and giggling joy the children had clean lost
All interest in the ragged doll and all the tears it cost

For Bibblebum and Bostiavan are really best of friends
And love each other dearly, and that is where it ends
A lot of people don't believe that the loch ness monster exists. Now, I don't know anything about zooology, biology, geology, herpetology, evolutionary theory, evolutionary biology, marine biology, cryptozoology, palaeontology or archaeology... but I think... what if a dinosaur got into the lake?

Sassy

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Re: Poems and odes....
« Reply #27 on: April 24, 2016, 10:12:02 AM »
Just seen your poem Samuel. I really like it.. As for nicknames we all have them in our family.


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Steve H

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Re: Poems and odes....
« Reply #28 on: July 25, 2016, 10:29:00 PM »
This won me the £300 first prize in the 'Literary Review's monthly poetry competition (sadly now no longer running) in May, 2011.

A Reply to John Donne's 'Holy Sonnet 10'
"Death, be not proud..."

It seems to me like whistling in the dark
To keep your spirits up, this desperate logic
Trying to prove that death is less than tragic,
That death is nothing: John, it doesn't work.
In the round earth's imagined corners lurk
The shades of those we've lost; and each sad reject
From life and time - each object with no subject -
Would say as much: except the dead don't talk.
So give it up: admit you're scared as hell.
Whatever bliss lies on the other side,
Death's one grim moment will not be denied.
It tolls for you and me, this passing-bell:
And if we were not terrified of death,
What need of hope and love? What need of faith?
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Steve H

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"Him? Midge Ure?"
"Yes, very."